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Jeannie Ewing's avatar

Clare, would you ever be open to sharing that poem you wrote on the beach? I, too, have been experimenting (playing!) with poetry more these days, and I have found doing so has reinvigorated my love of language. Paying sharp attention to external observations, I believe, is molding me into a better writer overall. And poetry can convey something that prose cannot, especially by using white space.

Anyway, about jealousy--I am learning that when I feel jealous/envious, I can give myself some time to have that inner temper tantrum, where I whine and shake my fists and say, "It's not fair!" Usually, I cool off and am able to grasp a more balanced and healthier perspective about my place and my voice.

Recently, I had one of these tantrums to myself, and I reminded myself that my voice matters just as much as the celebrities who are showing up on this platform. Even though my audience is much smaller, it doesn't matter. There is a place for ALL of us at this huge Substack table! And I also remind myself that what matters most is that I show up as my authentic self each day, because no one else can share my story through my unique lived experience.

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Clare, loved your take on this chapter and thank you as always for exploring it so deeply and honestly. I agree with you here: "She ignores the deep subterranean roots to our perfectionist tendencies and instead says, ‘stop doing that’. Perhaps this is an instance where there’s value in just trying: in choosing something that feels outside your creative comfort zone and giving it a shot.For me, it would probably be poetry."

First, I do claim the identity of perfectionist, or rather I did claim it with a begrudging sense that it was a personality trait I should rid myself of, that it got in the way of my happiness. And certainly "maladaptive" perfectionism does that. But in 2023 I happened to read a book The Perfectionist's Guide To Losing Control by the psychotherapist Katherine Morgan Schaffler and it flipped everything i thought I knew about perfectionism on its head. I recommend it to everyone who feels perfectionism is part of their identity, and a trait they'd rather not have. When we can see our perfectionism as a kind of superpower, by not warping in its more maladaptive behaviors, we can own it with pride. We are perfectionists because we care. Because we strive to do better. Because we have ambitions for ourselves, others, this world. It is also a beautifully written, warm-hearted book and it remains one I turn to again and again when I find myself dipping back into a more maladaptive frame of mind. So yes, Cameron is not at all in sync with me when she bascially says, "Get over your perfectionism. It is bad for you." And I totally agree with you that when perfectionism makes us unhappy, the driver is fear, not pride. The maladaptive perfectionist in me lacks pride in her work which is why she keeps striving. She fears it will never be good enough.

On the poetry example you gave, about trying something outside of our creative comfort zone, yes! I am writing "poemish" things as part of Jeannine Ouellette's Writing in the Dark community and it does make you pay much more close attention in a detailed, concrete way of our surroundings, and the feelings it evokes, like when you note down what you observe in nature. Jeannine calls these "shimmers and shards," because sometime they shimmer beautifully and sometimes they are shards that cut a little, that don't appear to be beautiful or pleasant but are important to pay attention to nevertheless.

On Jealousy, I do think it can be a teacher for us. It always reveals a shadow within us, as Carl Jung teaches. What we envy in others, we want for ourselves and often something is preventing us from daring to go for it. It is easier and safer to hide in our jealousy than to explore what it is there to tell us.

Also, this week for my artist's date I finally bought myself a basic watercolor kit, brushes and a paid of paper and markers so I will attempt the mantra exercise and maybe just let my little five year old artist self play. I find it so hard to let her simply play, with all the adult things we have to get done each day.

Week after week, the exercises elude me. I either avoid them, or rather, they don't call to me as much as other daily writing and medititative and self development exercises do. I am not sure why. I think perhaps because I have "done" the Artists' Way so many times before and assume, even if I can't remember, that i did the exercises. But that is a flimsy excuse. I am a different person, a different artist than I was then, and there is more to be discovered about what is blocking me and what may inspire me.

What I'd love to happen as I move forward in these remaining weeks is to return on a daily basis to the novel in progress that excited me so much last summer and into the fall but which has been dormant for half a year now. I am part of a writing group and in two weeks I have an opprtunity to share up to 30 pages of writing with my attentive group of writers and I don't want to miss the chance. I think the exercise, some of them, can help me unlock why I don't prioritize returning to my first and best writing love, which is fiction.

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